sábado, 11 de julio de 2009

Essay, Draft and Reflection

DREAMS: MY STATE OF MIND

Dreams are the representation of our lives; everybody sleeps because we need some rest by the hard day but, what happens when close our eyes and start our travel Howard other World?

Probably good dreams and bad dreams want to say something about yourself and many people make suggestion about what should be the meaning of the dreams, for example when you dream about money, the death of relatives, when you broken teeth, etc.

If I had to tell about my dreams I would say that the most interesting of them are not many you can count with fingers but they were important in my state of mind, because dreams are very strange and shocking more often very different about the reality, then it make you feel in a desperate way if you had dreams like to see blood, people who are dying, monsters or the end of the world but on other hand there are dreams that make you feel good because they are funny, there are cute animals, people smiling, you can have all the things that you want in the reality, dream with people that are stars but stay with you , wonderful things.

But then what are the dreams? I think that they are the product of our daily life, our experiences in the day, people who see or not see things we see in the streets or watch in TV, things we listen or talking during the day. Many things can be the consequence of the dreams, because our mind reflects some aspects of our lives and also our states of mind. I think that is the real meaning of the dreams



DREAMS: MY STATE OF MIND DRAFT

· We need to sleep because of the hard day that we lived.

· Usually I don’t remember what my dreams are about, but when I can remember then I feel strange, often my dreams are very ordinary like if I was in a real situation.

· Strange dreams that I can remember could be about people died, the end of the world, blood and other things.

· Good dreams that I had had are about funny things, sometimes I woke up smiling maybe because I dreamt about having money or be with my favourite stars, or be with people that I haven’t seen.

· I think that dreams are product of my daily life, my experiences in the day, things that I saw in the streets or people with whom I spoke.







DREAMS: MY STATE OF MIND REFLECTION
















This time we wrote an essay where we could choose the topic about dreams or a place in the past where we would have preferred to birth. Well, I decided to write about dreams I thought that it could be very interesting and easier talking about my own dreams in an essay. So I decided to do a brainstorm with different things that I considered to note in my final essay, when I finished my brainstorm I had to put in order my ideas but when I was writing this ended up been more difficult because I couldn’t organized my thoughts in a consistent way. My essay lacked the main topic, the body paragraph, and the creation a new topic. I think this was one of the most difficult writings that I had during this semester.




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