Freewriting and Reflection

ALICE'S DREAM


Once upon a time in a quiet and comfortable place, there were three happy friends: a cat who very grumpy, brave and loving with her friends. Piglet who was very shy and pessimistic but friendly; and o mole who was a dreamer, timid and dancer.

They met at the forest while they studied different animal’s languages in the some class. I’m the first year they did a lot of crazy things together. They always trusted each other; but all of them had secrets to keep about their feelings.

Cat always chatted on internet with a mysterious wolf. Cat met him and she was completely I’m in love with him, but she did not tell it to her friends. One day the wolf asked her to get with him. She felt so scared about that idea and when wolf was I’m another room she escaped. Wolf followed her and he told her that he loved her very much and he wonted to he with her all the life so she agreed to get marriage with him.

On the other hand piglets had a shame full secret. One day after be with his friends, piglet was sitting near the river. Suddenly appeared a little white bunny then the piglet felt very emotional and his heart was beating fast, it was a new felling for the little piglet. Piglet wonted ugly and was not able to he meet to the bunny. He did not say this secret to his friends.

When the piglet had enough courage to face the bunny and he said his first woods to the bunny, he felt very related and happy.

The bunny was hind, nice and lovable. I’m that moment the piglet was not tense, but embarrassed, because he was really in love with her but the bunny also felt a lot of love for the piglet.

Since that day they are always playing and speaking about chocolates. The mole had a secret too. She fell in love with a human was very special for her because one day there was hunkering in the forest and the people tried to hunt her, but they could not do it because a human saved her. The human was very worried about animal’s health and for that reason the mole felt a frenzy love for him, she thought. That it was not important that he was a human and she thought that the human was her twin soul, but she was in a mistake because he never looked liked that.

Those three happy friends meet in the forest, and they were very different like thinking, feelings and custom, but ever was something that joined them and shore part of their lives.

In that moment Alice woke up and she realized that al had been a dream she fell a little disappointed, but very happy, because she had a beautiful and funny dream about romance, animal’s and forest. She was very exited “this will be a new and great day!” she thought and now ill see beautiful side of life, because the animal’s that I had in my dream thought me about the feelings, friendship, courage and love “yes, this was a dream that I had when I was 5 years old, in that moment I did not understand the meaning, but now that I am is rears old I think that the dream means the friendships soul. I can realise that I am not alone and spike of being different in appearance or thought, there is ever something that makes that people are joined and that there are beautiful people waiting to find you.

The End~



ALICE'S DREAM REFLECTION

It was a short story that I did with my class mates was an activity in group and it was very interesting also funny.

We could see the imagination that we used for this short story, each one develop one character in the story and did a short narration about the own character.

At the beginning we couldn’t organize our thoughts very well and “the end” was very difficult to do. After a long time we could decide the end but before each one prepared the end and then we chose the end more interesting and funny. We put it in order the actions in the narration and it was very nice to do.

About the grammar and the technical process was more easy to everyone check the mistakes and considered the points of view of our follows their mistakes and our mistakes and work in group was more efficient.

I think that this narration has been one the best that I had done.